A Well Rounded Individual
By
Ultiminio Vega
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FADE IN:
EXT. BROOKLYN COLLEGE CAMPUS - DAY
Masses of noisy STUDENTS go toward their various
destinations.
EXT. STUDENT DORMS - DAY
The street is crowded with several cars as STUDENTS get
their belongings into their new homes.
INT. STUDENT DORMS - CONTINUOUS
Carrying a couple bags, JASMIN (17) waves to her PARENTS
from the entrance, then lets the door close.
She is dressed typically and draws excessive attention from
other new STUDENTS as she makes her way to -JASMIN’S DORM ROOM
She inches into the half-open door of her room. Her room
mate’s bed is covered with bags and clothes. A computer desk
is also full of her room mate’s things.
Jasmin puts her things down and relaxes looking around.
After a moment, she begins to put up her belongings.
LATER
Jasmin’s side of the room is now well organized. She reaches
into a mostly empty bag and pulls out a framed picture. Her
smile becomes saddened.
JASMIN
I wish you two could see me now.
You’d be proud, I think.
She struggles to contain her tears, and she shuts her door
completely.
JASMIN
You were the best friends I ever
had. You didn’t deserve...
She WEEPS.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
2.
JASMIN
It’s my fault I lost you.
She hangs the picture on a wall.
INSERT - PICTURE
TICKLE-ME-ELMO and OSCAR THE GROUCH each have an arm around
Jasmin as they laugh toward the camera.
BACK TO SCENE
Sitting down on her bed, Jasmin CRIES into her hands and
shutters when BECCA (17) enters. She is dressed
provocatively and puts down a bag when she sees Jasmin.
BECCA
What’s wrong?
She sits next to Jasmin and puts an arm around her.
JASMIN
I’m sorry. I’m Jasmin.
BECCA
Why are you crying?
Jasmin CRIES even harder -JASMIN
I lost my best friends.
BECCA
Oh, I get it; because you left for
school. Well my name is Becca and I
bet we’re going to great friends.
JASMIN
You really think so?
BECCA
Yeah, I do. I just bought some
chicken. Wanna help me eat it?
JASMIN
Okay.
She wipes her tears as Becca gets her bag of fired chicken.
Jasmin happily gets a piece of chicken and eats.
3.
INT. JASMIN’S DORM ROOM - DAY
On the floor, next to her bed, Jasmin’s cellphone silently
sounds her alarm as it vibrates ten minutes pass 9am. She is
curled up in bed surrounded by pillows.
Becca’s bed is unkept and empty.
A sliver of sunlight moves on Jasmin’s pillow and makes its
way onto her face. She GROWNS then nearly falls out of bed
searching for her phone.
JASMIN
Oh my gosh.
She rushes out of bed in her pajamas and quickly throws on
normal cloths, grabs her backpack, and leaves the room.
EXT. BROOKLYN COLLEGE CAMPUS - DAY
Jasmin flashes her ID at the GUARD at the front gate and
runs pass other students.
INT. INGERSOLL HALL - DAY
Out of breath, Jasmin wearily steps out the stairwell that
has a sign next it displaying "5th floor".
PHYSICS OFFICE
Jasmin enters. Behind a desk, looking busy, EDDY (19)
glances at the clock.
EDDY
Are you Jasmin?
She stumbles but holds herself up.
JASMIN
Yeah, sorry -EDDY
You’re two minutes late.
JASMIN
I’m really sorry -From behind a closed office door --
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
4.
DOCTOR TOCKMAN (O.S.)
Is that Jasmin?!
EDDY
Yes Doctor Tockman!
DOCTOR TOCKMAN (O.S.)
Send her in!
Eddy opens the office door for Jasmin.
DOCTOR TOCKMAN’S OFFICE
Light pours into the room from a window behind DOCTOR
TOCKMAN. He studies a modified I-tablet as Jasmin timidly
enters the office. He motions toward a chair. She sits.
DOCTOR TOCKMAN
Would you say you’re a responsible
person?
JASMIN
Yes, I’m sorry -DOCTOR TOCKMAN
The Student Assistant position you
applied for requires you to be on
time every time.
Jasmin squirms around on the seat.
DOCTOR TOCKMAN (CONT’D)
Can I trust you’ll take the job
seriously.
She bites her nails.
JASMIN
Yes, I’m totally serious about this
job, and I’m really smart -Silencing her with a wave, he takes a good look at Jasmin.
DOCTOR TOCKMAN
Alright, you have the job. Eddy!
Eddy opens the door.
DOCTOR TOCKMAN
Take her to Post Station.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
5.
EDDY
Yes sir.
She follows Eddy and Doctor Tockman studies his modified
I-tablet.
INT. POST STATION - DAY
Eddy and Jasmin step out of a stair case with a sign next to
it that reads "6th floor".
JASMIN
How is there a sixth floor in this
building?
She looks around confused.
EDDY
This is a really easy job. Most
professors say you can’t do school
work while doing the job, but
Doctor Tockman doesn’t care.
They turn a corner and at the end of the hall sits STACIE
(22) mature, and dressed in a business suit.
EDDY
That’s Stacie. She’ll tell you
about the job. Do everything she
says and don’t do anything she says
not to do.
Stacie sees them coming and stands.
STACIE
Hello.
EDDY
Stacie, Jasmin. You can take it
from here.
STACIE
Thanks.
Eddy leaves.
STACIE
Doctor Tockman stressed
punctuality?
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
6.
JASMIN
Yeah, I got the picture.
STACIE
Good. If you’re lucky you’ll do
like me and get to keep this
Student Assistant job for your
entire college career.
JASMIN
You’re a senior?
STACIE
Yes. The job sound easy, but it’s
really up to you.
Behind Stacie’s tiny desk is a closed door.
LATER
Messing with her cellphone, Jasmin sits at the tiny desk in
front of the door.
STACIE (V.O.)
All you have to do is, don’t let
anyone, anyone, open this door.
LATER
Wearing different clothes, Jasmin watches funny cat videos
on YouTube.
STACIE (V.O.)
Under no circumstances are you to
open the door.
LATER
Wearing different clothes, Jasmin makes a duck-face as she
takes a selfie.
STACIE (V.O.)
No matter what you see or hear or
smell; you do not open this door.
Is this clear to you?
JASMIN (V.O.)
Yes.
7.
LATER
Wearing different clothes, Jasmin plays hopscotch using the
floor tiles.
JASMIN (V.O.)
What’s in the room?
STACIE (V.O.)
I don’t want to know, and you
shouldn’t either.
After playing hopscotch, Jasmin leans against a wall. She
finds it dusty. Wiping the wall with her hand, she gathers a
chunk of dust then rubs her hands clean.
LATER
Jasmin falls asleep at the desk.
From under the door, a light breeze blows dust and then
inhales it under the door.
Jasmin almost falls off the desk and wakes up.
JASMIN
It’s twelve o’clock? Isn’t there
a... Oh, whatever.
She gathers her things and speed-walks out of there.
INT. POST STATION - DAY
Stacie puts on her backpack and smiles as she passes Jasmin
arriving.
STACIE
Right on time. Doing good Jasmin.
Jasmin gets settled at the desk in front of the door then
takes an English study packet out of her backpack and reads.
DOOR (O.S.)
(whispering)
Hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey,
hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey.
Jasmin slowly realizes from where the voice emanates. She
cautiously moves away from the door. She goes a few steps
away and enters a unisex restroom.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
8.
Moments later, Jasmin exits the restroom and takes her seat
in front of the door which is now slightly opened.
As she reads, the door opens without a sound, but Jasmin
senses something and turns. She quickly closes the door
making sure no one approaches from down the hall.
JASMIN
It’s not even locked?
She looks down the hall again making sure no one is coming.
JASMIN
It’s not even locked.
The hall is empty.
Jasmin opens the door finding nothing but darkness inside.
She pokes her head in the darkened room.
JASMIN
Weird.
The hall is still empty. Jasmin leans into the dark room
holding her cellphone flashlight over her head.
The door closes bumping Jasmin into the -DARK ROOM
Total and complete darkness surrounds Jasmin.
JASMIN
Where’s the door?..
DISEMBODIED VOICE (O.S.)
(jumbled screaming)
You lie, you fake, how could you do
this, you’ll never bring back
yesterday, wait, hate, wait, hate.
JASMIN
Oh no...
She HEAVES vomit.
9.
RESTROOM STALL
Lights flicker on. Jasmin vomits into a toilet. She steps
out of the stall and washes up at a sink.
JASMIN
What happened?
She looks around and exits the restroom.
INT. WESTQUAD BUILDING - DAY - CONTINUOUS
Jasmin exits the restrooms and goes toward the stairs.
JASMIN
Westquad? How did... Oh shoot!
She rushes down the stairs and out of the building.
EXT. BROOKLYN COLLEGE CAMPUS - DAY - CONTINUOUS
Racing across campus, Jasmin makes her way to Ingersoll
Hall.
INT. INGERSOLL HALL - DAY - CONTINUOUS
She runs up stairs to the sixth floor and rushes to -POST STATION
As she turns the corner, Jasmin sees herself leaning into
the dark room. The door closes bumping her into the room.
Jasmin is stunned. She timidly takes her seat.
Jasmin reflects on the situation and looks at the closed
door. She opens the door and steps inside closing the door
behind her.
DARK ROOM
There is total darkness. JUMBLED SCREAMING.
JASMIN
Here it comes.
She HEAVES vomit.
10.
RESTROOM STALL
Lights flicker on. Jasmin vomits into a toilet. She rushes
out of the stall and runs out of the restroom.
INT. WESTQUAD BUILDING - DAY - CONTINUOUS
Jasmin runs down the stairs and out of the building.
EXT. BROOKLYN COLLEGE CAMPUS - DAY - CONTINUOUS
She races across campus and enters Ingersoll Hall.
INT. INGERSOLL HALL - DAY - CONTINUOUS
She runs up stairs to the sixth floor and rushes to -POST STATION
Before she turns the corner, she uses her cellphone to peer
around and sees herself sitting.
Jasmin, at the desk, turns to look at the door then enters
closing the door.
Jasmin causally strolls to the tiny desk in front of the
door.
JASMIN
I went back in time.
She goes to the door and opens it. Jasmin from the future
races around the corner pushing present Jasmin into the
room. The door closes behind them.
INT. POST STATION - DAY - CONTINUOUS
Jasmin reads an English study packet, then frantically gets
her backpack and pukes in it.
DOOR (O.S.)
(whispering)
Hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey,
hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey.
JASMIN
Aw, man.
She looks up from her backpack perplexed.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
11.
JASMIN
I came back to the start of my
shift.
She turns to the door.
JASMIN
The time retraced is exponential.
She paces in front of the door.
JASMIN
If I’m right, I can go in again and
I’ll retrace -She does a calculation on her phone.
JASMIN
About ten hours.
She puts her phone on the desk and steps into the door. The
door closes behind her.
INT. JASMIN’S DORM ROOM - DAY
Awakening under a pile of pillows, Jasmin falls out of bed
and pukes into a waste basket.
Becca sleeps and shifts around. Jasmin gets her phone which
reads "6:27am. October 11, 2017".
Jasmin drops her phone and LAUGHS. Becca shutters awake.
INT. POST STATION - DAY
Stacie puts on her backpack and smiles as she passes Jasmin
arriving.
STACIE
Right on time. Doing good Jasmin.
Jasmin gets settled at the desk in front of the door then
takes out a notebook from her backpack. She writes an
equation and uses her phone to calculate numbers.
JASMIN
Two-hundred and seventy one days.
She looks at the door and opens it.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
12.
DOOR
Hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey.
Future Jasmin #1 runs toward Present Jasmin who is about to
enter the dark room.
FUTURE JASMIN #1
Wait, not yet.
PRESENT JASMIN
What are -Future Jasmin #2 runs toward them.
PRESENT JASMIN
What the, hey!
Future Jasmin #2 shoves the other two Jasmins into the room.
The door closes behind them.
INT. REHEARSAL SPACE - DAY
It is a small room decorated with rock star posters. A few
music instruments are around.
Jasmin poses for a picture with OSCAR (17) who looks like
Oscar the Grouch, and EMILIO (17) who looks like Tickle Me
Elmo. The photo is taken and Jasmin pukes into a pale.
OSCAR
Damn it Jasmin, pull yourself
together. We’re trying to keep up
an image.
Emilio LAUGHS as he checks on Jasmin.
EMILIO
What’s wrong? Are you okay?
JASMIN
Oh man.
Oscar gives Jasmin a soda.
OSCAR
Come on kid, walk it off.
She drinks soda and walks with Oscar a couple steps.
JASMIN
Oh my gosh! What’s today?!
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
13.
EMILIO
It’s Tuesday. We practice on
Tuesdays, remember?
JASMIN
What’s the date?
OSCAR
I don’t know. What’s on your phone?
She looks at her cellphone.
JASMIN
I did it!
She LAUGHS. Oscar and Emilio give each other worried looks.
LATER
Oscar and Emilio sit as Jasmin paces in front of them.
OSCAR
You gone completely sideways, Jaz.
The future? The friggin future?
Give me a break -JASMIN
I’m telling you the truth. You two
go on tour without me and our
friendship falls apart -EMILIO
If this is true, who wins the
election tomorrow?
Jasmin gives them a look.
EXT. PARK - DAY
Oscar and Emilio walk with Jasmin.
JASMIN
Hardly hear anything from you after
the first month. By the time school
starts, we don’t talk at all.
EMILIO
So you want us not to go on tour?
Do we do bad or get hurt or
something?
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
14.
JASMIN
Well, no -OSCAR
So why do you think we’re supposed
to go with you to college? Maybe
you’re supposed to come with us.
Jasmin sits on a bench.
JASMIN
But Oscar, you’re so smart in math.
You always help me so much.
Emilio sits with her.
JASMIN (CONT’D)
And Emilio, you can get an Art
degree. I -Oscar paces.
OSCAR
Alright, Future-Jasmin, here’s
something you might not have
thought about.
He address the sky.
OSCAR (CONT’D)
Maybe we don’t want to be toggles
in the corporate machine.
EMILIO
We have something right now, Jaz. I
feel the music we play. We’re
actually good. We might not always
have that.
OSCAR
Elmo’s right. What if
institutionalized learning saps the
creativity out of us?
EMILIO
Yeah, that’s what Pink Floyd taught
us.
Jasmin takes a moment to gather her thoughts.
JASMIN
Pink Floyd? Are you listening to
yourselves? You two need to grow
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
15.
JASMIN (cont’d)
up. You think things get easier as
you get older?
She paces in front of them until they sit.
JASMIN (CONT’D)
Well they don’t. You have to
compete for the best jobs, and if
you’re left behind, well you better
be comfortable with shit jobs.
PEOPLE walking by take notice of Jasmin’s tirade.
JASMIN (CONT’D)
And forget about getting a
self-respecting woman. Yeah, girls
right now are into you, but you
think that’s going to last forever?
Oscar and Emilio look embarrassed.
JASMIN (CONT’D)
Think about the future, guys. Trust
me. I’ve been there.
The three of them trade looks.
EXT. BROOKLYN COLLEGE - STUDENT DORMS - DAY
The street is crowded with several cars as STUDENTS get
their belongings into their new homes.
Jasmin waves goodbye to her parents as they drive away. She
continues to wave at the PARENTS of Oscar and Emilo as they
drive away. Oscar, Emilio, and Jasmin enter the dorms.
INT. PHYSICS OFFICE - DAY
Jasmin enters wearing business attire. Behind a desk,
looking busy, Eddy glances at the clock. It reads "9:25am".
His desk telephone rings and he answers.
EDDY
(telephone)
Yes sir... Certainly.
He hangs up.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
16.
EDDY
Hello Jasmin, Doctor Tockman will
see you now.
He opens the door for her and she enters -DOCTOR TOCKMAN’S OFFICE
The room is dimly lit. Jasmin steps into the office. Doctor
Tockman’s modified I-tablet displays a spectral analysis of
Jasmin. She shakes his free hand.
DOCTOR TOCKMAN
Good to meet you.
(beat)
again -JASMIN
Good to meet you too, Doctor
Tockman.
I-tablet displays readings: Subversion Level - 163,
Orderliness Adjunct - 397, Licentious Conjecture - 263,
Austere Factor - 719, Formidine Bridge Incursions - 6.
DOCTOR TOCKMAN
Have a seat, young lady. Tell me a
little about yourself. Where do you
see yourself in five years?
Jasmin confidently situates herself and takes a deep breath
to respond.
INT. RITZY CAFE - DAY
(SUPER: "Four years later")
Emilio, Oscar, and Jasmin finish eating while conducting
themselves in a reserved manner. WAITRESS (30s) drops in and
picks up their plates.
WAITRESS
How was your lunch?
EMILIO
Acceptable, thank you.
WAITRESS
Good, good. Are we having dessert
today?
Emilio and Oscar look to Jasmin.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
17.
JASMIN
Why not. We are celebrating.
WAITRESS
Hey, that’s nice. Congratulations.
Can I ask what’s the occasion.
Jasmin gives Oscar a glance.
OSCAR
(smiling)
You wouldn’t understand.
Waitress maintains her smile.
WAITRESS
Alright, I’ll be back to get your
order if that’s okay.
Oscar slight nods. Waitress nods, and leaves. After she is
gone, Emilio, Oscar, and Jasmin PFFT.
EXT. RITZY CAFE - DAY
Jasmin, Oscar, and Emilio exit the cafe and pass a BUSKER
playing music. Without looking, Emilio tosses a few coins
into Busker’s hat.
BUSKER
Thanks man -EMILIO
I got it at Banana Republic. Only
two-fifty.
OSCAR
That’s a steal.
JASMIN
Take it from me, Elmo, it looks
great on you.
They pass COP #1 directing BYSTANDERS as COP #2 beats a
PERSON on the sidewalk.
COP #1
Move along. Nothing to see here.
Move along. Nothing to see here...
Cop #2 wails on the Person who is unconscious --
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
18.
COP #2
Stop resisting! Stop resisting!
Stop resisting! Stop resisting!
Jasmin, Oscar, and Emilio hardly pay attention to the
commotion.
JASMIN
Fall fashions will be out soon -Looking like she just crawled out of a collapsed building,
JEZEBEL (18), who resembles Jasmin, runs up to her.
JEZEBEL
Mom! Jasmin!
JASMIN
Who are -JEZEBEL
I’m your daughter. I’ve come to
warn you.
Oscar and Emilio try to avoid eye contact with PEOPLE
passing by.
OSCAR
How embarrassing.
EMILIO
We’ll talk later, Jaz -Jasmin tries to walk around Jezebel.
JEZEBEL
No wait, you have to listen.
She forces Jasmin to stop.
JEZEBEL (CONT’D)
I went through the door.
Jasmin tries to get away, but Jezebel force her to sit.
JASMIN
I have to be somewhere -JEZEBEL
Shut up. I’m sorry Mom, but you
have to listen.
She gets right in front of Jazmin, but she keeps trying to
turn away from Jezebel.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
19.
JEZEBEL (CONT’D)
You people can’t have this
individualistic, conceited culture
anymore.
Jezebel shifts around trying to get Jazmin to see her.
JEZEBEL (CONT’D)
When it all goes down, it’s going
to be nightmare. Are you listening?
She shakes Jazmin, but she refuses to look at Jezebel until
she glares at her daughter.
JASMIN
(sobbing)
I always take what I can!
Jasmin stares into the camera.
FADE OUT.