Balak ni Maria
by
Czarina I. Gicale
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1. INT. DREAM - DANCE STUDIO
A room half filled with mirrors and reflection of Rose
appears. ROSE, a woman approaching her 40s, stands in the
middle of a dance studio. She looks directly into the
camera. Spotlight from above striked to her. The camera
slowly pulls back from an extreme shot of Rose. Rose starts
to dance as the camera slowly rotates around her.
Rose gracefully moves her hands around her hair down to her
face and smoothly glides her feet. An extreme close up shot
of a fervent face of Rose appears.
CROSSFADE:
2. INT. BEDROOM - MORNING
EXTREME CLOSE UP. Rose opens her eyes and stares at the
ceiling for seconds. Smile appears on her face.
2-A INT. BEDROOM - MORNING
MEDIUM SHOT. She then tries to extend her legs and attempts
to get up. Rose feels delighted as she succeeds. She
carefully stretches her back and rotates her head. Her eyes
set to the wheelchair/walker in front of her. Rose slowly
lifts her body to the wheelchair and makes a tender smile
after. She then wheels herself to the bathroom.
3. INT. BATHROOM - MORNING
Rose washes her morning face and smiles at the mirror. She
looks around the place and finds the toothpaste. She tries
to reach for it. She slowly tries to stand and reaches for
the toothpaste. Rose succeeds and cleans up after.
ROSE (O.S.)
(talks to herself)
Ugh, Gamayng kusog pa rose
4. INT. KITCHEN - MORNING
She wheels herself to the kitchen and opens the
refrigerator. Rose looks for her medicine and finds out it's
on the highest compartment. Rose slowly lifts herself up.
She feels tired. Rose pushes herself up until she falls down
her wheelchair.
Mary suddenly runs to Rose and carries her up back to her
wheelchair/walker.
ROSE
Ok ra, ok ra. Kaya ra nako akong
kaugalingon.
Rose insists.
MARY
AY SUS UNSAY OK RA? IKAW? OK?
Mary pauses.
2.
MARY
WALA RAKA NA UNSA!? Wala man ko
nimo tawga tawn uy.
Mary checks on every part of Rose and fixes her.
MARY
Unya na pag inom sa imong tambal
te, wala pa baya kay kaon. Unya mag
prepare na nya ta para sa imong
last phase sa imong therapy.
ROSE
Okay nako. Dili nako magpa therapy.
MARY
Last naman na te! Maka lakaw najud
ka ba!
ROSE
Enough na to siya. Ok na.. Ok nako.
4-A. INT. KITCHEN - MORNING
Mother comes in the kitchen and appears to be in a hurry.
MOTHER
Ayaw tawn mo pag langay-langay ha?
Lakaw ta ug sayo karon. Taod-taod
hawa nata diri.
Mary gazes to Rose. Mother slowly walks towards Rose.
ROSE
Dili nako magpa therapy, Ma.
MOTHER
(annoyed tone)
Unsa naman sad na Rose?
ROSE
(chill)
Dili nako mubalik didto. Humana
akong therapy. Ok nako.
MOTHER
(strong)
Ay sus naa nasad ka! Mulakaw sa ko
kadali! Adto sa ko ila Pits.
Mary and Rose gives an empty face. Rose leaves the area.
5. INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY
BACK SHOT/TRACKING SHOT. Rose wheels herself to the living
room and opens the curtain. She faces the window and feels
the morning breeze. She breathes deeply and looks outside.
3.
Mary approaches Rose.
MARY
Te.. Pasagdi lang sa to si Mama.
ROSE
Ok ra. Mayta makasabot si Mama.
MARY
Pero te, ngano di naman ka magpa
therapy?
ROSE
Ok na ko. Kaya na nako.
MARY
Wala paman ka nahuman sa imong
therapy, te. Pero hapit najud
kaayo. Gamayng antos nalang jud.
Like hebily.
Rose didn't say a word. She stayed by the window, watching
the world outside.
5-A. INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY
Mary knows that Rose doesn't want to be bothered. She leaves
the place and walk towards her keyboard. Mary fixes her
table and plugs in the keyboard. The song opens with a high
pitched first note.
5-B. INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY
Mary breaks into song "Napu Kalibo" as Rose listens by the
window. While Mary is singing, Rose unconsciously fell
asleep on her wheelchair, listening.
CROSSFADE:
6. INT. DREAM - DANCE STUDIO
Rose stands in the middle and flexes her body through the
song. Her movements are awkward at first but as the song
intensifies her movements become more confident and fluid
and smooth.
CUT TO:
7. INT. LIVING ROOM - AFTERNOON
MARY
(whispers)
Te, te nabalik na si mama. Nana ang
taxi. Ngandam na ta kay ma late
unya ta
Mary holds the wheelchair arm.
4.
ROSE
Dili na lage ko..
MARY
Di naka ganahan ma ayo te?
ROSE
Naayo nako.
7-A. INT. LIVING ROOM - AFTERNOON
Mother comes in the place and notices something.
MAMA
O Unsa naman mo diha? Wala pa lage
mo nag ilis? Pangita'e na nag
sanina imong Ate, Maria!
ROSE
Ayaw na Ma.. Dili nata mu adto.
MAMA
Ngano man? Dako na baya tag nagasto
ani ha! Dili pa kaya sa sweldo sa
imong manghud, di nasad makaya sa
akong lawas mu trabaho.
ROSE
Di ko ma..
MAMA
Nganong selfish man kaayo ka!?
Padung na kag kurenta nya ingana
ka!?
Rose starts to tear up.
MAMA
Kinsa man mu atiman nimo? Kahibaw
ka nga wala diba?
Rose was slightly taken back by her mother's question. A
moment of silence ensued.
Camera changes to Mary.
MARY
(slightly intense)
AKO MA! AKOY MAG ALAGA NI ATE!
Ayaw ug pugsa si Ate. Dili lalim
iyang gibuhat didto sa gawas para
nato. Sakto nato tanan.
Mary surprised by her remark, looks down and her shoulders
droop. Mother exits the room. Rose breaks down. Rose looks
out the window, still crying. Mary stares at her sister and
backs away from her.
5.
8. INT. LIVING ROOM - AFTERNOON
Minutes later, Mary suddenly hums. It's the tune from her
song in Rose's dream. Rose stops crying and slowly turns her
attention to Mary. Rose wheels towards Mary.
ROSE
Uh, Mary..
MARY
Te...unsa man?
ROSE
Sorry kaayo ganina ha?
MARY
Okay ra to te uy.
ROSE
Dili... sorry jud sa akong gi buhat
nimo. Sakto man sad si mama. Sorry
kay nadumtan tika.
MARY
Ha? Ngano gi dumtan na nuon ko nimo
te? Wa man kay gibuhat nako!
ROSE
Kay nakuha nimo ang ganahan nimo sa
kinabuhi.
MARY
Ay te, way in'ana'ay te! Kebaw ka,
privilege kaayo na nga nakatabang
ka sa tibuok pamilya, kung wala ka,
wa jod ko kaabot aning ing-ani.
Kami man gani magpasalamat unta
nimo ani tanan. Inspirasyon jud
takRose cuts off Mary.
ROSE
Ayaw na pud ko pahilaka bi pero
thank you sad bitaw. Tungod nimo na
tagaan kog paglaom nga mabuhat nako
akong gusto.
MARY
Unsa diay imong gusto te? Abi nakog
happy na ka atong naka trabaho kas
gawas.
ROSE
Oo happy man, pero lahi raman gud
if mabuhat nimo imong gusto. Gusto
jud nako ang makasayaw. Tungod
nilang mama, wa nahitabo akong
gusto kay lahi man ilang ganahan.
6.
MARY
Aw ganahan diay ka ma krumper te?
Hehehe
Mary actions some krumping moves.
ROSE
HAHAHAHA! Di sad uy! Contemporary
akong gusto. Kanang pina bali bali
lawas ba, lupad lupad. Naka
workshop2x ko sa gawas pero wala pa
jud ko ka perform.
MARY
Nindota ana te uy!!!!
ROSE
Lage. Nindot jud pero kuan ba! kato
ganina, unsa to imong gi tukar
tukar?
MARY
Aw kato te? Akong kanta nga gisuwat
te
ROSE
Para kinsa mana? Ikaw ha.
MARY
Secret hahahahah. Jimma ra to uy
ROSE
Char. Sige daw pwede kantahan ko
nimo ato?
MARY
Sige te! Pero wa pa bya ni mahuman.
Pero sure jud ko nga ikaw ang
pinaka una makadungog ani!
8-A. INT. LIVING ROOM - AFTERNOON
Mary walks toward her keyboard and starts to play her song.
The song starts out soft. Rose suddenly feels light and
happy. Her body wants to move but she can't. And Mary ends
the song at the first chorus.
ROSE
(smiles)
Nindota oy.. Nindot jud kaayo. Tara
adto tag recording studio!
MARY
Hala ha. Nag joke. Paayo usa.
FADE TO BLACK
7.
9. INT. KITCHEN - MORNING
WIDE SHOT OF KITCHEN. Backshot of Mary, in her short shorts
and an oversized white shirt covers her body. She stops
scrambling the egg and washes her hands. She stretches and
walks towards the DVD player and turns on the music. (LOCAL
SONG DAPAT) A face of an uplifted Mary appears. Mary walks
her way back to the sink and prepares breakfast for Rose.
10. INT. BEDROOM - MORNING
WIDE SHOT OF ROOM. Mary's morning alarm buzzes the whole
room as Rose wakes up to it.
11. INT. DINING AREA - MORNING
Mary quickly set aside the knife, stands up and washes her
hands.
MARY
Hala ui. Patay jud ko ani
10-A. INT. BEDROOM - MORNING
Mary slowly opens the door and come across Rose with a small
smile. She gives a sigh and grabs her phone, turns off the
on going alarm.
MARY
Te? Hehehe. Kanang good morning,
ganina raka nag mata?
Rose nods and gives her a smile. Mary smiles back.
MARY
Ali bangon na te. Mama-init sa ta.
12. INT. LIVING ROOM - MORNING
Mary wheels Rose to the living room and fixes the curtains.
ROSE
Tabangan na tika didto bi
Rose attemps on wheeling herself to the kitchen.
MARY
Aysus ok ra te uy ara lang ka, akoa
naning trabaho karon.
13. INT. LIVING ROOM - MORNING
Mama appears and greets them with a confused face. Mary
continues preparing the food. Suddenly, the music gets
louder. Mary looks around and sees Rose infront of the DVD
player. Mary smiles and tucks her hair behind her ear,
smiles and goes back in preparing the food.
8.
Mother walks her way to the living room, sits down the couch
with her coffee.
MAMA
So unsa namay plano nimo Rose?
ROSE
(wheels herself to the
window) (didn't answer)
()
Mary sets her eyes to Rose, listening to their conversation
and continues preparing breakfast.
MAMA
Mao jud na imong ganahan? Ug
ganahan ka maayo ka, padayon ta sa
imong therapy.
ROSE
Ma, mag sige nalang ba ta ug lalis
tungod ani?
13-A. INT. DINING AREA - MORNING
Mary makes an interruption and tries to cheer up the
situation. Breakfast is ready. She calls Rose and her
Mother.
MARY
(In good vibes)
Hui! Kamong duha! Kasayo ug
kanindot sa buntag unya mag lalis
namo. Dali namo, mangaon na ta,
lami kaayo ni akong giluto para
ninyo. Cooked with love gyud ni.
13-B. INT. DINING AREA - MORNING
Rose and Mother approaches the dining table. Everybody is
set to eat. Mother and Rose are facing each other while Mary
sits right on them. Mary breaks the silence in the room.
MARY
Ma, asa ka ugma? Kuyog ta na.
MAMA
(sharp)(Voice exclaimed)
Asa man? Unsa nasad na imong plano,
Maria?
MARY
Ingna sa nga mokuyog ka (smirks)
MAMA
Unya kana???? (points her lips to
Rose)
9.
MARY
Bilin ra man daw siya. Bantay
balay.
Mother sets her eyes to Rose while eating. Rose continues
eating, looking at her food. Minutes later, mother stands up
and puts her plate sa sink and walks towards the door.
MARY
(shouts)
Ma! Adto lang ta kita ha! Alas
syete sa gabie.
Mother is by the door as Mary shouted and she just nodded to
Mary's remark.
14. INT. KITCHEN - MORNING
After breakfast, Rose helps Mary with the dishes.
14-A. INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY
Having a good time, Rose sets up the karaoke, plays the
kinect and plays billiards after. Rose wheels herself to the
window while Mary walks towards her keyboard.
14-B. INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY
Rose lays her hands on the window frames, grips it and tries
to stand. She slowly puts her feet on the ground. Having a
hard time, she stands and leans herself by the window.
Slowly leading her way to walk slowly, Mary sees her. Mary
reacts with a small smile.
15. INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT
Mother prepares herself, wears good clothes and light
make-up.
15-A. INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
As she's heading outside to put on her sandals, she was
surprised seeing rose's wheelchair on the corner, confused
as she mummbles.
MOTHER
Unsa mani?, nganong naa mani ngari?
Asa man diay nis Rose? Asa man diay
ning kimpang'a?!
15-B. INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
As her phone rings (Mary's calling)
MARY (O.S)
Ma? Asa naka? Alas siti na! Ari na
10.
MOTHER
Oo lagi sige padung nako
Mother is dropping the call as she wears her sandals. Turns
off the house lights and closes the door.
FADE TO BLACK
16. INT. SAFAD THEATRE
WIDE SHOT. Rose, all alone in the center stage with her
wheelchair. Spotlight on her. Rose is nervous and excited at
the same time. She's sweating and her hands starts shaking.
Mary, stands right beside the stage with her keyboard,
crosses her fingers, watches Rose with her tears about to
fall. She's close to crying.
Mary starts playing. Rose attempts to get off her
wheelchair. She's halfway to standing. Rose lifts her head
up and immediately looks at Mary at the right side. She
suddenly feels tired and bites her lower lip. Rose sits down
her wheelchair and smiles.
ROSE
(V.O.)(deep sighs)
kaya rani
She does it again and fails the second time. Mary continues
playing and her eyes set to Rose, waiting for that moment.
Rose starts to panic but she's hiding it to Mary. She tells
Mary to stop playing. Mary stops.
MARY
(Stares Rose for 2 seconds) Okay ra
ka diha?
ROSE
Oo ok ra. Sige padayon
Rose closes her eyes, inhales softly then exhales loudly.
She slowly moves her feet out of the wheelchair. Her arms
holds tight to the wheelchair and tries to lift herself up.
Rose is shaking and she is slowly close to standing up. Mary
plays the song without Rose's permission. Rose is fully
standing up. She ties her hair into a bun.
Rose starts dancing. Mother arrives at the place and is
shocked to what she saw. She slowly walks her way down to
the stage, close to crying, focuses her eyes to Rose on
stage.
Rose suddenly falls down. Mary stops playing and rushes to
Rose. Mother stands in her place for a minute and tears fall
down her face. She goes up to the stage and comforts Rose
and Mary.
11.
MOTHER
(crying)
Unsa mani inyong kabuang gisudlan
intawn uy? Ga concert mo nga way
tao? Huhuhu
MARY
Mama sad uy. Tungod jud nimo ba
nganong natumba si Ate!
MARY (CONT)
Nya nihilak jud ka Ma? Ana bitaw si
Ate na ayo na siya.
Both of them laughs while Rose set her eyes down. Mother
suddenly lifts Rose and places her to the wheelchair. Mother
caresses Rose's hair. She positions Rose's wheelchair facing
Mary.
Mother looks at Mary and points her lips to the keyboard.
Mary fixes herself and walks her way to the keyboard. She
starts playing and Mother lifts up Rose and locks her arms
to her body.
MOTHER
Ayaw ug buhi ni Mama ha.
Mama and Rose starts dancing.
END.