Writing Samples
questions I had were promptly answered with friendly
Writing Samples – Jennifer M. Holmes
responses.
I’m a creative writer with a passion for fiction and travel-related
Our tour was a one-day trip along the Pacuare River on Class
articles. Below are three samples:
III and IV rapids. Despite my excitement, the night before the
1. Travel Article - My Costa Rican Adventures - Rushing
excursion I was not feeling very calm. I had never rafted more
than a Class II and I had heard that the rapids here could be
through the rapids of the Pacuare River
very intense. The Pacuare River is sourced from the Cordillera
Planning a trip to Costa Rica, looking for adventure? White water
rafting on the Pacuare River is sure to please…and getting drenched
is guaranteed!
de Talamanca and flows over 100 km into the Caribbean Sea.
Nurturing the rain forest that surrounds it, this river has been
named by National Geographic as one of the world's most
I am all for adventure, especially anything involving nature. So
thrilling places in the world to white water raft. But despite my
when I planned our last visit to Costa Rica, naturally my travel
fear, I was excited to board the small private bus which picked
companion and I were
us up at our hotel in San José for the long trip to the Rios
both
about
Tropicales Operations Center which is the starting point for the
booking a white water
tour. After the bus stopped at a few different hotels to pick up
rafting trip.
more rafters, we made our way out of the city for a roughly 1
thrilled
There are
many options for tours
with
the
rivers
Reventazon, Pacuare and Corobici offering some of the best
white water rafting in the world. After weighing all the options
we decided to book with Rios Tropicales online. Their prices
were reasonable, the booking process simple and the few
and 1/2 hour drive into the rain forest.
As we drove through rudimentary roads winding this way and
that, bumping over the ever present potholes along the way, I
was mesmerized by the splendor of nature in the dense rain
forest surrounding us. The breeze coming through the open
window was cool and fresh. I could smell the clean scent of
chlorophyll which permeated the air and the sound of birds
Just before we pushed off, the guide's face split into a grin as he
chirping in the tree tops and animals rustling in the
warned us that it was quite possible we'd fall into the water
undergrowth relaxed any trepidation I had had when we
given the fast conditions, but reassured us that the two guides
boarded the bus in San José.
in the raft would be quick to pull us out, and safety kayakers
Just before 8am we arrived at the Rios Tropicales Operations
Center where a traditional Tico breakfast was laid out on the
would be following behind if the guides couldn't get to us in
time.
buffet table for us – beans and rice, exotic fruits and juice.
His warning made me a bit nervous and the beans and rice sat
Beans and rice are Costa Rican staples and the freshness and
heavy in my stomach as we paddled out into the water, making
seasoning that this dish is made with makes it so tasty you
our way to the rapids beyond. My nerves were immediately
never get tired of eating it. After our hearty breakfast the six of
distracted by the lush green landscape that hung over the
us on the tour began changing into rafting clothes; shorts and
river's banks.
shirts made of quick drying material, and water shoes.
moss and water falls trickling down the slopes of the banks
Afterwards we were fitted for life-vests and grabbed some
rushed past us as we headed into faster waters. The sound of
paddles. The guide led us down to the rafting put-in spot.
birds calling to each other became overpowered by the sounds
After a review of the equipment, safety procedures and
of rushing rapids.
instructions on rafting basics, we were ready to begin our tour.
Huge leafy plants, tall thick trees covered in
Before we got to the first rapid run, the guide told us that in dry
Since we were visiting during the rainy season, the guide
season the tour would take about five hours, but in these wet
warned us that it would be a fast ride because the water levels
season conditions it would be more like three hours. The tour
were so high.
High water levels also mean that getting
would bring us through some of the Pacuare River's biggest
completely soaked is guaranteed because huge waves and
rapids such as the Upper and Lower Huacas, Cimarron and
whirlpools are very common in these conditions.
Dos Montañas. Just before we hit the first rapid, the guide
grinned again and reminded us to follow his instructions on
when and how to paddle and to keep our knees pressed into to
scampering back across the raft's seats to pluck us out of the
the inflated seats in front of us, which would help us remain
rushing water by grabbing us by our life-jackets and flinging us
securely in the raft.
into the bottom of the raft like stupefied fish, gasping for
At that point we didn't need to paddle any longer as the current
breath.
brought us fast into the first set of rapids. Our guide yelled out
Reaching the raft take-out point a few hours later, we were
“Pura Vida” and off we went. Adrenaline pumping, I heeded
greeted with a huge buffet lunch, a comfortable dining area and
his commands which he spat out in rapid fire. My mind swam
hot showers. The day had sped by so fast - literally - and I was
with the orders of Right back! Left forward! Paddle hard! Left oars
saddened that our trip was over.
up! After each set of rapids, we were met with calm pools of
destined for the Arenal area but if we would have had another
water where we would raise our paddles in the air to tap
day to spend on the Pacuare River I would gladly have done so.
against each other in a toast of Pura Vida, meaning pure life (my
personal definition was we are still alive!).
The next day we were
In addition to one-day tours, Rios Tropicales also offers multiday adventures which include a stay overnight at their Lodge
The rest of the tour was a blur of water and adrenaline; the rush
located within the rain forest. I would highly recommend Rios
of the water and the green glory surrounding us gave me a
Tropicales to anyone planning a trip to Costa Rica looking for
glorious feeling of how good it is to be alive. At one of the calm
adventure. You will definitely find it on the Pacuare River -
pools we took a break to swim and float in the calm waters,
Pura Vida!
flanked by tall banks chalk full of foliage and trickling with
small waterfalls.
I have to admit that I did fall in….twice…during some of the
fast Class IV rapids, as did some of my raft mates. But true to
their word, the guides were amazingly fast in fishing us out,
over 3 million inhabitants, it is surprisingly walkable. The city
2. Travel Article - Segways In Spain; Exploring the city of
center is filled with architecture both historic and modern,
ranging from the massive Royal Palace, the sprawling Plaza
Madrid
Segway tours in Madrid - a great way to see the many historic
Mayor Square, the quaint side streets and villa squares.
landmarks in Spain's capital city and the perfect solution for
There is a lot to see and explore in this city which has been
sightseers who are short on time!
settled since pre-historic times, but my visit with my daughter
Although the weather in Spain is at its coolest in January, if you
want to avoid the high season crowds you'll encounter in
warmer months, then Madrid is the place to be. Even though
the winds are sharp and the rain plentiful, this bustling capital
city of Spain still hums
with
commerce
and
a
was a short one, so we decided to forego the walking tours in
favor of one that would cover more ground in less time. Rather
than disconnect ourselves from the flavor of the city by
shortcutting through the well-run subway system, we found a
tour company that takes sightseers through the city on
Segways.
sprinkling of tourists. The
For those not familiar with Segways, these contrivances are
current sluggish European
basically upright scooters that are self-balancing and propel
economy seems under the
forward or back depending upon where the rider shifts their
surface
Madrid's
weight. To move forward you lean into the handle bar and to
cobblestone streets, since
move backwards you simply lean back. They are incredibly
the buildings are well conserved and the sidewalks are tidy and
easy to use and only move as fast or as slow as your body
well-kept.
position commands.
Madrid is centered on the Iberian Peninsula, inland from the
The Segway tour we took was with a company called MadSegs
coast, and even though it is the largest city in Spain, filled with
Tours. Run by an ex-pat from Scotland who had emigrating
of
years back for the love of a Spanish woman, Anthony is fluently
walking by, but Anthony was quick to aid me in setting myself
bilingual with a wonderful sense of humor and an outsider's
straight.
perspective of his adopted city.
The tour brought us past some fabulous attractions such as the
It had rained the majority of our brief stay in Madrid, but the
Royal Palace which is the official residence of the King of Spain,
day of our tour turned out to be sunny albeit cool and windy.
the mysterious looking Debod Temple and the ornate Opera
Anthony met us in front of the Plaza de España in the Gran Via
Theater. But that is just to name a few. Anthony was able to
area of the city. As we set out on the Segways zipping along the
show us much of the city's key attractions within only a few
sidewalks, the brisk wind bit at our noses but our fingers stayed
hours - perfect for our needs given our brief itinerary.
warm thanks to Anthony who had thoughtfully brought gloves
to lend us.
After the tour, my daughter and I stopped at a small café to
warm up after being in the cold January weather. We were
For most people, the use of a Segway is intuitive once you
delighted to enjoy Madrid's infamous freshly made churros
know the mechanics of how it works. For left-handed people
dipped into thick cups of chocolate - the perfect way to end a
though, it can be a bit challenging when trying to turn. The
perfect day in beautiful Madrid!
reason for this is that the rider must turn the left-side handle up
or down to turn left or right; this works wonderfully for righthanded people, but the directional commands are counterintuitive for lefties. Being left-handed, at first I thought I was
uncoordinated with the Segway (I am by nature a clumsy
person), but Anthony explained to me that I wasn't the only
lefty that had a habit of turning left when meaning to go right.
Due to this quirk, I had a few near-misses with pedestrians
3. Synopsis of my novel - “Following Michael”- a 94,000-
following Michael she realizes there is a huge gap between the
word piece of fiction set in some of the places in the
world and her narrow views of it. While enduring the comical
world which I’ve visited:
fumbles of an inexperienced traveler, her journey through
In a journey around the world to find the reason for her son’s
suicide, a mother’s travels bring her the insight into his
troubled mind that she desperately seeks, the blunders of a
naïve traveler she would rather have avoided, and a self-
Canada, Europe, Asia and Central America provides her with a
heart-wrenching understanding of her son’s perspective and
the realization that he suffered from an undiagnosed mental
disorder. Unexpectedly, along the way Dana also becomes
aware of things about herself she never would have seen
awareness she never expected.
without the window that was the lens of Michael’s camera.
Since adolescence Dana’s creative son
was a complete mystery. As Michael got
older,
she
felt
their
once
close
relationship spreading across a great
divide as she attempted to get him to
focus on settling down instead of
wandering the world with his camera.
But without warning, his life ends in
suicide and Dana feels responsible; did she ask the wrong
questions? Were her expectations of him too high? Whatever
the reason, she is compelled to go in search of the answers,
following Michael’s travels guided by the letters and
photographs he left behind. Prior to her quest, Dana had lived
comfortably in her life’s routine in Syracuse, New York; but in