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by Beth Rauch | Published June 30, 2020 | 2 comments
Killing o a character in your novel is a dilemma for some authors. But if it is done
correctly, advances the plot of your book, and makes your reader go, “Oh, I didn’t see
that coming,” then you know you did it right. Read on to find out if killing a character
is the right thing to do.
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Killing o a character is sometimes a necessary evil. And for the record, I laugh
and have tea with Satan when I kill o a character.
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When I was writing my first novel, Behind The Eyes Of Dorian Gray, back in 2005, I had a
sudden epiphany.
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I would kill o a character awesomely.
It was one of those “aha” moments. I’m fairly sure everyone in Southeastern Ohio saw the
small nuclear explosion that was my mind at the time. She wasn’t the first character I
killed in a story. But her death made the book’s ending so much better.
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Why Should I Kill O My Character?
Authors may argue over the best reason to kill o a character. Some authors may never
to Enter
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kill o a character in their careers. But there are excellent reasons for taking a character
out. They include:
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Advancing the story – pick up any Agatha Christie novel and you have a corpse
somewhere on the property. This death advances the story. It gives out Inspector
Poirot and Miss Marple something to do throughout the book.
Fulfilling the doomed character’s personal goal – take Fili and Kili in The Hobbit.
They had to die to motivate Thorin Oakenshield into fulfilling his personal goal:
killing Azog the defiler to save the line of Durin and in revenge for the death of his
grandfather. Thorin’s death preserved the line of Durin for his cousin Dain
Ironfoot, reclaimed Erebor, and fulfilled his personal goal as he killed Azog with
his last dying breath. (Yes, I’m a Tolkien nut. Yes, I can talk about this book all day.
No, I’m not crying, you are.)
Character motivation – pick any character in the Harry Potter series that died
before the last book and you have motivation enough for Harry, Ron, and
Hermione to go up against Voldemort.
The recompense of their action – Catherine’s death in Wuthering Heights is
caused by Heathcli and he never fixes their relationship.
Removing an excess character – sometimes somebody just has to die to trim a
cast of characters that is too large.
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There are good reasons not to kill your character too. Photo by Joyce McCown on Unsplash
There are also reasons NOT to kill a character, such as:
Killing them o just to shock the reader. Shock value works if you can write it
correctly.
Making the readers sad because you can. Good luck selling your next novel.
Removing an excess character. Yes, it’s in both lists. Does this character belong in
your story in the first place?
Let’s look at that last one. Some casts of characters become too big to handle. In order to
manage it, an author will kill o a character. Every character has a reason to be in your
book. They serve a purpose. If you cannot transfer that purpose to another character so
that your story flows, you need to reevaluate why the character you want to kill o is
there.
Instead of killing o the character, consider writing him or her out of the story. You won’t
bog your readers down wondering why you killed them o . You will also save them from
unnecessary heartache.
How Do I Know If I Should Kill This
Character?
If you think killing o a character can satisfy the reasons above and not leave a vacant
role in your book, see if you can check these o :
You can justify killing the character o based on the reasons to do it above
The reason to kill the character is present in your plot already
You know which role and archetype the doomed character plays in your story
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Another character can fill that hole in the story
Your story ends in such a way that the doomed character doesn’t need to be filled
Can you check o those items in the list above? If you can, then go for it. Kill o that
character. Then sit back and watch the fun begin.
Ever kill o a character? Ever have a character death a ect you? Tell us about them in the
comments below.
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Beth Rauch
Born and raised in upstate New York, with a brief and very influential stint living in Great
Britain, Beth A. Freely Rauch calls Texas her home with her husband Daniel, daughter Caitlyn
and cats, Peanut Butter and Toast. Beth has 14 years of writing experience as a copywriter and
published author. She enjoys shooting pool, working a haunted house during Halloween, and
comic book hero movies. She is also a managing partner of Stoney Hollow Paints, a horse
ranch in Texas specializing in showing and breeding Paint horses. She holds a Bachelor’s
Degree in Journalism and Mass Media Communication with a minor in Marketing as well as a
Master’s Degree in English and Creative Writing. Beth is the author of "Behind The Eyes of
Dorian Gray" and co-author of "The Legend of Captain St. Pierre." She is currently working to
complete her third novel, "The Loch."
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