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The Impact of Social Media on Adolescent Mental
Health
In recent years, social media has become an integral part of adolescents’ lives,
influencing various aspects of their development. Researchers have increasingly
focused on the potential effects of social media use on mental health, with studies
yielding mixed results. Some evidence suggests that excessive social media use is
linked to negative mental health outcomes, such as anxiety, depression, and low selfesteem (Twenge, 2019). Conversely, other research highlights the potential benefits of
social media, including increased social support and community building (Best,
Manktelow, & Taylor, 2014).
One of the critical issues in this area of research is the difficulty in establishing a causal
relationship between social media use and mental health outcomes. While crosssectional studies indicate a correlation, they cannot determine whether social media use
leads to mental health problems or whether adolescents with existing mental health
issues are more likely to engage in excessive social media use (Hoge et al., 2017).
Longitudinal studies, which track individuals over time, are better suited to address this
issue, although they too face challenges, such as participant attrition and the rapidly
changing landscape of social media platforms.
Another factor to consider is the role of individual differences. Adolescents do not all
experience social media in the same way; factors such as personality traits, pre-existing
mental health conditions, and offline social environments can moderate the impact of
social media on mental health (Valkenburg, Peter, & Schouten, 2006). For example,
introverted adolescents may experience social media differently than their extroverted
peers, with the former potentially finding online interactions less fulfilling and more
stressful (Wang, Jackson, Zhang, & Su, 2012).
Moreover, the type of social media use also matters. Passive consumption, such as
scrolling through feeds without interacting, has been associated with negative
outcomes, whereas active engagement, like commenting and sharing, may have a
protective effect (Verduyn, Ybarra, Résibois, Jonides, & Kross, 2017). Therefore,
interventions aimed at promoting healthier social media habits might focus on
encouraging more active and positive interactions online.
In conclusion, while social media has become a ubiquitous part of adolescents’ lives, its
impact on mental health is complex and multifaceted. Researchers and practitioners
should continue to investigate the nuanced ways in which social media use can both
support and hinder adolescent mental health. By doing so, they can better inform
guidelines and interventions designed to maximize the benefits of social media while
minimizing its potential harms.
References
Best, P., Manktelow, R., & Taylor, B. (2014). Online communication, social media and
adolescent wellbeing: A systematic narrative review. *Children and Youth Services
Review, 41*, 27-36. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.childyouth-
Hoge, E., Bickham, D., & Cantor, J. (2017). Digital media, anxiety, and depression in
children. *Pediatrics, 140*(Supplement 2), S76-S80. https://doi.org/10.1542/peds-G
Twenge, J. M. (2019). More time on technology, less happiness? Associations between
digital-media use and psychological well-being. *Current Directions in Psychological
Science, 28*(4), 372-379. https://doi.org/10.1177/-
Valkenburg, P. M., Peter, J., & Schouten, A. P. (2006). Friend networking sites and their
relationship to adolescents’ well-being and social self-esteem. *CyberPsychology &
Behavior, 9*(5), 584-590. https://doi.org/10.1089/cpb-
Verduyn, P., Ybarra, O., Résibois, M., Jonides, J., & Kross, E. (2017). Do social network
sites enhance or undermine subjective well-being? A critical review. *Social Issues and
Policy Review, 11*(1), 274-302. https://doi.org/10.1111/sipr.12033
Wang, J. L., Jackson, L. A., Zhang, D. J., & Su, Z. Q. (2012). The relationships among
the Big Five personality factors, self-esteem, and Internet addiction among college
students. *Computers in Human Behavior, 28*(6),-.
https://doi.org/10.1016/j.chb-
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The Impact of Social Media on Adolescent Mental
Health
In recent years, social media has become an integral part of adolescents’ lives,
influencing various aspects of their development. Researchers have increasingly
focused on the potential effects of social media use on mental health, with studies
yielding mixed results. Some evidence suggests that excessive social media use is
linked to negative mental health outcomes, such as anxiety, depression, and low selfesteem (Twenge, 2019). Conversely, other research highlights the potential benefits of
social media, including increased social support and community building (Best,
Manktelow, & Taylor, 2014).
One of the critical issues in this area of research is the difficulty in establishing a causal
relationship between social media use and mental health outcomes. While crosssectional studies indicate a correlation, they cannot determine whether social media use
leads to mental health problems or whether adolescents with existing mental health
issues are more likely to engage in social( mediaHoge et al. 2017) note that longitudinal
studies, which track individuals over time, are better suited to address this issue;
however, they too face challenges, such as participant attrition and the rapidly changing
landscape of social media platforms.
Another factor to consider is the role of individual differences. Adolescents do not all
experience social media in the same way; factors such as personality traits, pre-existing
mental health conditions, and offline social environments can moderate the impact of
social media on mental health (Valkenburg, Peter, & Schouten, 2006). For example,
introverted adolescents may experience social media differently than their extroverted
peers, with the former potentially finding online interactions less fulfilling and more
stressful (Wang, Jackson, Zhang, & Su, 2012).
Moreover, the type of social media use also matters. Passive consumption, such as
scrolling through feeds without interacting, has been associated with negative
outcomes, whereas active engagement, like commenting and sharing, may have a
protective effect (Verduyn, Ybarra, Résibois, Jonides, & Kross, 2017). Therefore,
interventions aimed at promoting healthier social media habits might focus on
encouraging more active and positive interactions online.
In conclusion, while social media has become a ubiquitous part of adolescents’ lives, its
impact on mental health is complex and multifaceted. Researchers and practitioners
should continue to investigate the nuanced ways in which social media use can both
support and hinder adolescent mental health. By doing so, they can better inform
guidelines and interventions designed to maximize the benefits of social media while
minimizing its potential harms.
REFERENCE
Best, P., Manktelow, R., & Taylor, B. (2014). Online communication, social media, and
adolescent well-being: A systematic narrative review. *Children and Youth Services
Review, 41*, 27-36. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.childyouth-
Hoge, E., Bickham, D., & Cantor, J. (2017). Digital media, anxiety, and depression in
children. *Pediatrics, 140*(Supplement 2), S76-S80. https://doi.org/10.1542/peds-G
Twenge, J. M. (2019). More time on technology, less happiness? Associations between
digital media use and psychological well-being. *Current Directions in Psychological
Science, 28*(4), 372-379. https://doi.org/10.1177/-
Valkenburg, P. M., Peter, J., & Schouten, A. P. (2006). Friend networking sites and their
relationship to adolescents’ well-being and social self-esteem. *CyberPsychology &
Behavior, 9*(5), 584-590. https://doi.org/10.1089/cpb-
https://doi.org/10.1016/j.chb-
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