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FADE IN:
INT. CAVERN
There is a single white flower glowing a pitch black cave,
along the walls are red arrows pointing to the left, and blue
ones pointing to the right. There are falling pebbles from
above, and a large rock falls near the flower. Sunlight beams
into the cave, and a shadow falls.
YEEEEAHA!
UNKNOWN
A human like creature dressed in a GREEN SUIT and MASK lands
painfully next to the flower.
Owwww....
UNKNOWN (CONT'D)
The human creature gets up, and pointed ears are poking out
from behind the mask, with snow-white hair and blue skin
poking out from behind the mask. The creature is female, and
there is a name tag on their coat. It reads ZELL, and appears
to be around 17 years old.
ZELL
Ahhh, that's smarts...ugh, stupid
rope breaking on me. Rudding
wires...
Zell gets up, and looks around in awe. Her mask is slightly
cracked, but she pays it no mind. Her eyes fall on the blue
arrows, and Zell brushes herself off.
ZELL (CONT'D)
Aw man, can't believe I fell into
this--the book!
Zell reaches around and pulls out her pack. Digging inside,
she pulls out a large BOOK with two interlocking circles. She
inspects it for damage, and breathes in relief.
ZELL (CONT'D)
Phew, it would be rud if this thing
broke now.
A rock falls next to her, and she looks up to see more rocks
falling.
Oh, poll.
ZELL (CONT'D)
2.
Zell scampers away from her spot, and looks up to see a large
creature with teeth digging its way into the cavern.
*Roars*
CREATURE
Zell winks at the creature, and waves goodbye.
ZELL
Gonna have to try harder then that
friend! Go enjoy the Old World once
more! Ya rad head...
Zell dashes into a corridor as rocks fall. She proceeds to
traverse down several other ones, and Zell eventually arrives
at a LARGE STEEL DOOR.
INT CAVERN - STONE DOOR - CONTINUOUS
Multiple lights crisscross the floor, with reflective stones
bouncing light offs. Zell takes her mask off.
ZELL
Okay, I can do this, I can do
this. This is the third time, and
that's the charm.
Zell proceeds to tip toe around the lights, making sure not
to trip on any of them. She makes progress, but stops when
she see's a lizard like creature stuck under a rock.
ZELL (CONT'D)
Oh, great, a Riggi, please don't be
the poisonous kind...
The RIGGI let's out a whine, its tail is stuck in the floor.
Zell is conflicted for a moment, but she moves carefully over
to it and pulls it out.
ZELL (CONT'D)
There you-ack!
The Riggi leaps at Zell's cheek, and bites. She falls back
into a light beam and throws the Riggi off. It scampers away.
Ow...
ZELL (CONT'D)
Zell rubs her cheek, and shakes her fist in anger.
3.
ZELL (CONT'D)
You shall rue this day riggi!
RUUUUUEEE!
The door behind her opens, and Zell winces. A group of
heavily armed coat and mask wearing elves appear out of it,
all of their weapons raised at Zell. Zell waves weakly, and
there is a collective sigh.
Again?
ELF 1.
ELF 2
Zell, this is the third time this
week.
Another elf walks forward and takes off her mask. Her name
tag reads as ZLYN. She looks a lot like Zell, but with a hard
face and wrinkles under her eyes. She looks to be in her late
40s. Zell winces as she approaches.
ZELL
Uh, ah... Hi mom.
Zlyn growls.
INT. GUARD STATION.
Zlyn is dragging Zell by the ear, and Zell is wincing with
each step.
ZLYN
How many times do I have to you
tell you not to go to the surface
young lady?
ZELL
It's about 13 times so far...
ZLYN
What was that?
ZELL
Nothing mom.
Zlyn's face softens as Zell looks away. There is a BEAT, and
Zlyn shakes her head.
ZLYN
Look, I know that...I haven't been
the best mother to you. But you
can't keep going outside!
4.
Why not?!
ZELL
Zell gestures to her home, where a small town, where rows of
stone homes made out of various materials, like steel, rock,
and ceramic lay. But it lays within a enclosed cavern, with
no sunlight.
ZELL (CONT'D)
Underwood is just a hole in the
ground!
ZLYN
And going up into the radioactive
sun is somehow better? Underwood is
your home Zell, our family helped
build this place!
Zlyn gestures to the where bright lights hang from the roof,
and artwork is painted on the highest walls. Some point to
exits in the wall, others resemble the night sky. The largest
painting, however, resembles the SUN.
ZLYN (CONT'D)
Our history, that of the elves, is
made here! The Old World is gone,
Zell.
ZELL
Its literally just dried paint, and
our real history is out there!
ZLYN
The surface is dangerous!
ZELL
So what? Dad did it too.
ZLYN
And look where it got him!
Both Zell and Zlyn registers what was just said, and Zlyn
looks aghast at the words, and Zell forcibly pushes Zlyn
away.
ZLYN (CONT'D)
Zell, waitZELL
Oh, shut up Zlyn!
There is deafening silence, and several other guards have
stopped to look at them in shock. Zell herself is shocked,
but before Zlyn can speak, Zell runs away.
5.
Zell...
ZLYN
Zlyn stands there, hand raised, and another elf walks to her
side. He is a burly, set elf, with a massive mustache. His
name tag reads: CHIEF.
CHIEF
You can't keep her under forever.
I know.
ZLYN
CHIEF
Besides, we could always use
another scout. It could be good for
her, get that youthful energy all
out of her system. A little
rebellion never hurt anyone.
Zlyn glares at Chief. He shrugs it off.
CHIEF (CONT'D)
Or, hey, build those walls and keep
burning your bridges, it's your
choice.
He walks off, then pokes his head back in.
CHIEF (CONT'D)
Bridges, burn. Bad.
Zlyn scoffs.
INT. UNDRERWOOD VILLAGE - MARKET
Zell is fuming as she walks through the village, there is no
natural light, only lamps suspended from the ceiling.
Shopkeepers wave to Zell as she passes. One calls out to her.
VILLAGER
Hey Zell, go out again?
ZELL
Maybe! You get injured?
VILLAGER
Yep. It's gonna take months to
heal!
The villager holds out their arm, and there's a shallow cut
along their arm.
6.
ZELL
Oooh, that's nasty. You get the doc
to check it out?
VILLAGER
Yep, good thing is: I won't have to
chop this off, like this!
They take a large cleaver, and swing it down. A big, blue
fruit is cut in half.
ZELL
....well! Good luck with that!
VILLAGER
Thanks, you too! Tell your mom I
said hi!
Zell groans, and continues to walk.
Around Zell, there are various shops and homes. One of which
sells mechanical hands and ARM BRACES. Zell is grumbling to
herself as she walks.
ZELL
Stupid zly-Mom, what does she know?
She's been stuck down here her
whole life. Don't know what dad
even saw in her.
Zell kicks a bucket, and a voice speaks up from above Zell.
UNKNOWN-BUCK
Prepare to fall, vanquisher of
buckets!
Zell calmly steps to the side as a another elf falls flat on
his face in the spot Zell was just standing. He appears to be
around Zell's age, 17-18ish.
ZELL
Hey Buck, what's up?
BUCK
Ugh, not me.
Zell chuckles and extends her hand to him. He takes it, and
Zell helps him up. Buck is tall, lean elf that has a narrow
face. Basically, a typical elf, but with short purple hair.
BUCK (CONT'D)
Did you go outside again?
7.
Yep.
ZELL
BUCK
You know your mom doesn't like
that.
Zell crosses her arms and huffs.
ZELL
Oh, so what? Not like she cares...
Zell grumbles under her breath, and Buck sighs.
BUCK
Well, we have lived in Underwood
since it was founded two hundred
years ago. Something about escaping
from the hostile world above, ever
since it was burned in white fire.
He gestures outward, where child elves play with makeshift
toys as older adults return from a hard day's labor.
BUCK (CONT'D)
I mean, its not bad!
ZELL
But its not enough either.
Zell points to an large support structure in the distance,
which helps keep the cavern's walls up.
ZELL (CONT'D)
Sooner or later, we're gonna have
to leave this place before the roof
comes crashing on our heads.
BUCK
I don't disagree, but is that
really your problem?
ZELL
We've been friends since we were
kids, you already know the answer
to that.
Buck shrugs, giving up on the debate.
BUCK
Anyway, did you get anything
interesting from the outside?
Zell reaches into her bag.
8.
ZELL
More then that, look!
Zell pulls out the book, and several pictures. The pictures
show a large empty building with red and white flags poking
out of it, a red tree, and a four legged animal with wings.
One of the pictures looks like a Riggi, and the teeth are
highlighted purple.
Buck looks over the photos in amazement.
BUCK
Woah, how far did you go this time?
The City?
ZELL
To the Far-Sign, actually. Any
further then that will take too
long to get back. And you know how
my mom is.
BUCK
Are you two fighting again?
Zell grumbles and throws her hands up in frustration.
ZELL
She's just so...gah!
Gah?
BUCK
ZELL
GAAAH! Do you know just annoying it
is to live with her?! She's
constantly: Oh Zell, stop being
such a brat. Oh Zell, quit having
dreams and go work in the mines for
the rest of your life!
BUCK
Well, maybe she just wants you
safe.
ZELL
Maybe, but we can't always dig in
the mines! Sooner or later, we're
gonna run out. Other villages are
out there, but we haven't
established trade with them!
BUCK
Do we need to? I mean, I like
driving my driller...
(MORE)
9.
BUCK (CONT'D)
I've also started to practice with
the Cavern-copter to put new
decorations at the top of the
cavern.
ZELL
Do you want your kids to grow up in
a mine, like you, and your great
grandparents did?
BUCK
The mines aren't that bad...
ZELL
Oh, shut up!
Buck winces, and Zell looks guilty.
ZELL (CONT'D)
Sorry, sorry. I'm just...mad, I
shouldn't take it out on you.
BUCK
It's fine...kinda.
ZELL
Kinda? What kinda reason is kin-da
da da...
Zell stammers as she looks past Buck. Her mouth is agape, and
she looks love stuck. Buck follows her gaze, and he sees
Allion walk by.
ZELL (CONT'D)
Agaugada....
Allion has a very 'girl next door' appearance. Soft facial
features, long hair, a sweet demeanor, and is 17ish, but
she's wearing a armored guard uniform with a gun strapped
over her shoulder.
Buck waves a hand in front of Zell.
BUCK
Oi, Underwood to Zell, you there?
ZELL
Ah ha... Sorry, what?
BUCK
Just go talk to her, it's not
Allion dislikes you, or something.
10.
ZELL
Eh? No, no no, I can't-nope!
BUCK
Zell, please be an elf for once in
your life and just talk to her for
once.
ZELL
What, you think I can just talk to
the prettiest girl down here? Just
like that?
Zell turns away.
ZELL (CONT'D)
I mean, what am I supposed to talk
about? How much I admire her laugh?
Or her hair? Or how that one time
she gave me her apple when I was
starving?
Buck glances to the side, and has a large smirk on his face.
ZELL (CONT'D)
Or, I dunno, maybe ask her about
her day, or if she's free later,
or...or...she's right behind me,
isn't she?
Yeeep.
BUCK
ALLION
Oh, please, don't let that stop
you. Tell me again that I have nice
hair.
Zell turns a bright shade of red, and runs for it. Buck and
Allion share a look, then shrug.
BUCK
That girl just can't take anything
head on, can she?
ALLION
Nooope. She's still cute though.
BUCK
If you say so.