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Grammar Slips: There is a person on LinkedIn who you are very interested in connecting with because their role and career progression is of interest to you. Corrections: There is a person on LinkedIn who you are very interested in connecting with because his role and career progression are of interest to you. Grammar and Punctuation Slips: 1) Create an tailored version for each application 2) Address it to the hiring/recruiting manager 3) Where possible, try to address your letter to the hiring/recruiting manager using their name. Corrections: 1) Create a tailored version for each application. (Add a period at the end of the command sentence.) 2) Address it to the hiring/recruiting manager. (Add a period at the end of the command sentence.) 3) Where possible, try to address your letter to the hiring/recruiting manager using his name. Grammar and Punctuation Slips: 1) State what can you do for the company 2) Vary the format and tone of voice as appropriate Corrections: 1) State what you can do for the company. (Change can you to you can. Then, add a period at the end of the command sentence.) 2) Vary the format and tone of your voice as appropriate. (Add a period at the end of the command sentence.) Grammar and Punctuation Slips: 1) Remember these answers don’t define you, they are merely an indication to help you understand where you see yourself today when it comes to building relationships for your network. Corrections: 1) Remember, these answers don’t define you. They are merely an indication to help you understand where you see yourself today when it comes to building relationships for your network. (Add a comma after Remember. Then, add a period after the first sentence.)