Editing
Running Head: PROPOSALS
Proposals
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Persuading someone of something is a bid that requires excellence and
one done in the simplest ways possible, which is what proposals do. To achieve this,
one has to illustrate and understand the issues’ needs and solutions. A successful
proposal has to have enough evidence supporting any idea or claim presented and also
to show that the presenter actually did the field work.
This shows the reader that you are not basing your proposal on some hearsay but that
you are eligible for analyzing and examining the problem and that you have an actual plan of
action.
Proposals have an inbuilt structure that define them with each part of the structure
serving a different and vital role .The structure of the proposal includes:
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Introduction
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Budget
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Procedure
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Reference
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Timeline
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Appendices.
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Qualifications
The introduction part is often the section where you identify and a background
information of the problem. It’s also in this section where you state the reasons behind you
conducting the research. This is where you include the general and specific objectives of the
study. You can as well state any attempted ways to resolve the problem if any and should also
indicate if they were helpful or not.
The procedure section illustrates the data collection methods as a writer you are
going to use. It is also necessary to stipulate the time frame i.e. the time in which the report
was conducted and when the report will be released. There is also a budget section in which
you incorporate all the expense incurred or are to be incurred in the process of writing your
proposal. It helps in making the evaluation process achievable for the aimed audience.
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The qualifications section is set to be a description of why, you, as the writer are the
best person for accomplishing the task. This is the part where you list your academic
qualifications, achievements, your skill set and any projects done and those that are in
progress.
In the appendices and references sections, you cite all the materials used for the
work whether journals, magazines, online publications or books. The appendices section,
however contains additional information about a book, a journal or a publication.
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Everybody is rightfully entitled to their opinion .However much we
may want to substantiate this claim, every writer is expected to support his/her ideas
or claims. To achieve this there are three types of arguments which are used. They
include
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Deductive argument
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Inductive argument
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Analogy argument.
Deductive arguments are used in scientific reports and are inclined into using
general rules to achieve specific outcomes. These type of arguments use secure and credible
sources of information to help the presenter give authentic information or evidence. They also
apply syllogism in which you have a major and a minor premise and a conclusion.
Inductive arguments are inclined into a generalized sphere rather than working on a
specific approach. A series of experiments are used and integrated to generate a theory
.Supposing a same result is achieved or observed from various experiments the result is what
is called a rule. Repetition in this case is important because it helps in differentiating the real
trends from anecdotal instances.
Analogical arguments are commonly used for political purposes even though they
are the weakest of the three. This type of arguments compares one thing with another, more
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familiar, expecting the same outcome .They are the best when supported logically and with
evidence of course.
(3) The revision and editing process is a key step in proposal writing and it
comprises of three levels which are:
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Document - level editing
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Paragraph level editing
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Sentence level editing
Document level editing popularly known as macro editing is the first stage of editing
and it mainly focuses on the major parts of the paper. These parts include word and page
count, paragraph arrangement, format styles, referencing and citations, writing ethics and any
legal issues. The paper should be easy to read or go through which means that it should not
have information cramped up.
Paragraph level editing comes second in the editing process, the paper has to have
smooth flow that is facilitated by using good transitions in the paragraphs. Each topic
sentence that starts a paragraph should have “meat”. “Meat” in this context is supporting
evidence, so your statement is not just a mere statement. It may be examples and or a detailed
explanation. The paragraphs also should not be too long and not too short. Too short
paragraphs are shallow while too long paragraphs have too much information that may put of
the reader.
Sentence level editing is the last stage of the revision process. Here, every sentence is
scrutinized to see if it adheres to all set rules such as the tense, the voice, spellings,
punctuations and the correct word choices.
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After the editing part, the presentation is the last thing on the slate.
Everybody wants to have an effective presentation thus it is important to understand
the dimensions of an effective presentation. These are:
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Audience analysis
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Public speaking etiquette
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A clear presentation slide(s)
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Audience analysis is key for any type of presentation and therefore it is highly
recommended before you go on any platform to understand that the topic, the place and the
purpose of the presentation will each have a different audience .Learn your audience
dimensions in terms of language spoken, age, gender ,religious and cultural beliefs etc. Using
simpler terms in your presentation will help you build a better relationship with your
audience.
A good presentation does not come on a silver platter and this means you have to
work your way up. Practice on tonal variations, voice projection and facial expressions to
achieve the desired taste .A monotone will occur if as a presenter you are not familiar with
the topic of discussion and so to avoid this, do your research well. Finally, a presentation is
not a presentation if there is no eye contact with the audience. Work on your shyness, you can
learn public speaking etiquette for better results.
A presenter should have a well-designed presentation with clearly outlined sections
that can be easily understood. An effective presentation also must have the ability to draw the
audience’s attention. In the introduction part, the topic of discussion and main objectives are
previewed.
Good transitions should characterize the body part and it should not be cramped with
too many points. The findings, conclusions and recommendations come last. At this point it’s
important to work on your wrapping up the presentation. The audience is not supposed to be
left comprehending whether the presentation stalled or it actually ended, let them know.